New Love

Hoping you are who you say you are

Everything seems warm

Take me away

Show me that beautiful white light

Shining bright in the sky

Off to Paris

Dazing in your eyes 

Soaked in your arms

Safe and secure  

You give me hope

You give me a drive

Life hasn't failed me yet

Perfect match but will it last?

Author's Note

Love is possible for eveyone. We just have to make the right decision when love is in consideration.

Reviews

[Daz]

So sweet the words you have here. Each line creates a feeling so pure. Only those who feel it know it.

[Richard McLin]

In a lot of ways this is a very different take, and a refreshing one, on the love poem. It's saying that love is out there for all of us, but it's also kind of saying you have to be smart about it. I love the flow of this piece. Great job.
-Richard

[nayeli]

Thank you Richard you totally get where I'm coming from.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

True love is out there to be found-at the perfect place and time but it requires total pureness of heart, love will find you🌹

[nayeli]

I totally agree with you. All factors are a need

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹love conquers all 🌹

[nayeli]

Hopefully anyone who reads this will get my point of view. Love can be great. Love can be a learning lesson.

[sette]

again this poem tells about soulmate or the perfect match. i still believe that there is that perfect one for each of us but due to lots of reasons sometimes we turn up with the wrong ones but loving is learning. keep on writing, you express things beautifully.

[nayeli]

Thank you.. I would like to keep love alive. But it's really had to find. Mirages are so easy to fall for.

[sette]

yes very well said