LOVE ME

SHOW AND TELL

I DON'T WANT PERFECT

I'M NOT PERFECT

I WANT LOVE

UNDERSTAND ME

CARE FOR ME

HAVE MY BACK

YOUR THE GUN, I'M YOUR BULLET

YOUR THE CAR, I'M YOUR GASOLINE

WE NEED EACH OTHER

FOR NOW AND MAYBE FOREVER

WE CROSSED PATHS FOR A REASON

MY HEART IS FILLED WITH CARE AND LOVE

TRYING MY BEST TO LOVE YOU AND LOVE ME TOO

OUR LIVES ARE DIFFERENT

BUT YET OUR CONNECTION CAN REACH PAST THE MOON 

HELP ME LOVE YOU BETTER

SO YOU CAN LOVE ME

Author's Note

SHARE YOUR FIRST THOUGHTS AFTER READING THIS. WHAT COMES TO YOUR MIND FIRST?
THANK YOU FOR ALL FOR READING.

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

The first thing that comes to mind, after reading this poem, is love in its pure and simple application. Love must be reciprocated. Love is a divine connection between souls.

'Our connection can reach past the moon.'
I love that line, for it is full of truth concerning the spiritual and limitless and eternal nature of love.

WELL DONE

[nayeli]

Thank you for your honesty.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. Take two to tangle and I liked how you use the language to make your point.
"YOUR THE GUN, I'M YOUR BULLET
YOUR THE CAR, I'M YOUR GASOLINE
WE NEED EACH OTHER"
The above lines. Very nice. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[nayeli]

No thank you for sharing your opinion. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

The longing in those final two lines was tangible!

[Daz]

I read this and I hear a voice of passion. A sense of knowing exactly what one wants out of a relationship. No confusion going on here. To me that is very sexy.

[nayeli]

Awwww thank you. I agreed

[sette]

CO-EXISTENCE IS THE FIRST THING THAT COMES TO MY MIND WHILE READING THIS POEM. A WELL-WRITTEN ONE IT CAPTURES HOW THERE IS REALLY A SOULMATE FOR EVERYONE. KEEP ON WRITING.

[nayeli]

Thank you love. I greatly appreciate this.

[sette]

you are very much welcome

[lessa (kenzie)]

This is so well written, I enjoyed this.

[nayeli]

I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for commenting.

[Richard McLin]

My first thoughts are of someone who is looking for something real. A great love poem is something special, and this is a fantastic poem.
-Richard

[nayeli]

Thank you Richard