Last Kiss

One day we would lean against each other,

Like the twain solitary birds,

And share and inspire the kaleidoscopic vistas of our cascading memories.

Your exhaled breath will warm my wrinkled skin,

My fragile eyelids will lay my eyes into yours

I will sing you the song of our first meet,

Shiveringly you will plant that passion fueled kiss on my creased forehead,

Your hands will be around me like those wings of an erne,

And slowly we will both pave our way to Azrael's lane.

Reviews

[Wall Hermitt]

You’re undoubtedly a great poet, Indian Ink (should I call you this?) The first sentence stole my complete focus with a simile of the ‘twain solitary birds’, whilst the rest of the piece delivers a beautiful expression of romance with stunning imagery… Had a wonderful read. Thanks for the share.

W.H.

[Indian Ink]

Thanks a lot Hermitt, for your review...call whatever you may like to...:)
Nayanika (Indian Ink).

[Wall Hermitt]

You're welcome, Nayanika!

[Gurleen Saluja]

Amazing words.Reflects great imagery. Thanks for the share.

~Gurleen

[SAYED THANGAL]

highly thought provoking and mystic in every sort, paving the way to think out in different angles ,........
sayed thangal

[Indian Ink]

thanks a lot...:)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The story itself is amazing, its been a long, long time since I've seen anything like this. I read the whole thing and its good. The mechanics could be better but the storyline is excellent.

[Indian Ink]

Thanks a lot :)

[Indian Ink]

thanks raj for the encouragement...this piece of work is totally based on what I really feel about my life.

[raj24]

miss Nayanika.. you are supposed to reply back on the review i made..:)..

[Indian Ink]

ohh very sorry...LOL... All this happened because of my stupid phone...something went wrong there...SORRY!!!!

[raj24]

lolzz.. its ok.. :)

[raj24]

i really enjoy reading these romantic ones.. they make me be a part of them... first kiss and leaning against each other for long just holds everything ... loved it and i am smiling ..its beautiful ..thanks for sharing :)

Raj

[Indian Ink]

Thanks Raj once again!!!