I'm your straying unwritten verse, pen me down.

You!

The euphoria of my old book smell,

Petrichor after the long dry spell,

Crispy petals of rose that I have saved for years,

Your heart pumps in mine.

Antsy heart chisels my ribs apart,

That sensation running through my nerves,

And crawling up my spine

Just to have a glance of you.

My heart sank in solitude,

Shadowed by the lantern light,

And perfumed by your touch,

Slowly your love paved me to death.

I wake up in the middle of the blue-sombre

To gather the tear that rolls down my cheeks kissing my thirsty lips, 

Your words echo excavating my restless heart,

And I feel you peeping through my moist skin,

Yet I linger in your oblivion.

My atemporal love creeps towards you consume you,

You will be flooded by my tear that sing the song of melancholy,

I'll teach you what love is.

Author's Note

I would love to accept all kinds of criticism and appreciation. I'm here to learn and explore myself.

Reviews

[raj24]

its beautiful actually.. thoughts of a lost love that you are waiting for.. those beautiful memories and the desire to have that love once again.. lots of emotions.. and a bit of sadness too.. i said bit because i liked the romantic part more... it brought me closer to the theme... i loved every bit of it.. waiting to read more from you..thanks for sharing :)

Raj

[symmetryAsymmetry]

I don't know why but it felt like it there was a darkness around it...it built a whole atmosphere of it own...i particularly liked the ending...

[Indian Ink]

yeah, something sort of!!! Thanks a lot for the review. :)

[Indian Ink]

Thanks Raj for your appreciation...

[raj24]

you are welcome :)