"Femme Fatale"

just a poem from my shattered heart...heheh

"Femme Fatale

Betrayed, Fooled, Conspiracy and all
Why it always end like this?
Crying late at night; such a traumatic experience!
Just like a whirlwind summer love affair,
Everything has come to its end.

I really thought t'was you,
who gonna fight for me too.
Your promising eyes,
Saying you love me more than I do.
What happened to your plans and promises?
Easily blown by that Damsel in distress.

Why can't you see?
She's just a certified Femme Fatale.
Why did you choose her, instead of chosing me?
You know I would fight for you,
But now I think its time to let go
For now I sing, the last song for you.

-=MGCN=-

Author's Note

hmmm...I just wrote it yesterday, when I was really confused of everything....hope you like it...enjoy....

Reviews

[Pax]

letting go is simply the best way. wonderful way to express your emotion.

[CHRIS ANDES]

on the first stanza "traumatic experienced"-should not have 'ed' at the end of experience..
..a typo I guess the word 'whirwind' lost the letter 'L'
..over all its an emotional piece
nice write =]

[natzky]

heheh...thanks a lot musicfunk for the comment...
all hail..:)

[CHRIS ANDES]

no prob
=]

[Seanne Tholltree]

oww is this somewhat dedicated to me?y'know

that femme fatale destroyed my life//

[natzky]

heheh....thanks for the review seanne...
damsel in distress really sucks...:)

[lady france]

confused of what,,it doesn't show here..

[natzky]

hahah...confused about my feeling for my ex lover...
thanks for the review...:)

[lady france]

you shouldn't be cause exes are exes. dont bring the past back

[natzky]

yup....thanks for that...heheh...
he's not worth it...:)

[lady france]

why did he fool you?you should break him up...sorry i didn't get to you back sooner i'm kinda busy...

[natzky]

heheh...idk...anyway,,,thanks for the comment...:)

[Talismanic]

Blinding! x) ... wow... I feel this way too :))

[natzky]

thanks for the comment talismanic..;)

[Gene Hiccup]

hayaan mo na siya natsuke...he doesnt desrve someone like you..magsama sila.hahahaha

[natzky]

hahahah...TAMAH...

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Nice piece, and the idea of how you are trying to fight for your love is wonderful..I am not a critic or any thing I always admire anyone who writes, just a small attempt will make you big still, here is one suggestion for this work, the color you used and font don't really go well it stressed my eyes as I read it...other than that its wonderful :)

[natzky]

thanks for the comments...sorry for that it's just that I really love purple....:)

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

hehe!! its nice you love purple, its fine.. just stated it cause I felt like..other ways its nice.. and I like purple too just, I am not addicted to it.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes. This was really good. I like it aswell Great job. And I love the color! :)

[natzky]

hmmm..thanks my friend..
yeahh..cause I really love purple...(purple addict)..;)

[Harley (arbiter)]

OMG. I'm a purple addict too! Haha!

[natzky]

hahaha....I know right...:)
anyway..thanks for the comment..;)

[natzky]

...:)thanks for appreciating my poem..heheh

[Michael X]

wow, artful suggestion of the meaning, the fuzzy intrepidness of the font
really draws the meaning out, to suffer heartache as a sweet sorrow,
excellent job, I liked this alot :)