"Two-Faced"

"Two-Faced"

You're such a genius
you made me believed.
I still remember the way you talked-
A certified poet with flowery words
Such a perfect pretender-
Sick of trying to be up front
while hiding beneath cover.
How come I didn't notice?
That everything was a trap
I was blinded by your charm
And I Let you fool me around
But now finally it's over
You're true colour was revealed. 

Reviews

[paparapapa]

It's really painful when we open ourselves to a certain person and then we'll learn later on that this person never reciprocated. That he was actually wearing a mask. It makes us pessimistic when it comes to trusting people. I loved how you described that person. Comparing him to a poet was also a smart move. Really good job on this one. Keep on writing. :)

[THIS ACCOUNT IS CLOSED]

pple are stupid, man I say screw them. If they can't be real then Thats their problem..... You seem like a real person.

Nice work!

[lady france]

it's somewhat dissapointing to trust a fly by night person..

[natzky]

thanks for the comments...heheh

[CHRIS ANDES]

...brilliant words
...I never thought of that!!!

[johnnyqueer]

This is a good poem. Its easy for many people to relate to, because we have all been fooled by someone before.

[Seanne Tholltree]

i agree with you natzky. i also met a two-faced person but from the start i already know that that person is fake, because little did that person know that i could smell a bad aura even from afar..hehe even online(joke)heeh