"All That You have Given Me"

All That You Have Given ME

I do thank you for every sleepless night,

When I could not sleep for cold

I do thank you for your caressing arms,

When everything seems falling apart

I do thank you for standing by my side,

When I was just a little fiend

I do thank you for your love and care

That makes me strong and firmed.

I do thank you for being my antidote,

When I was poisoned by failures and pain………..

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

you have a great inspiration as what your poem tells me..

[Gene Hiccup]

your poem can be considered as something that is simple yet sweet.it reminds me of the simple things that you can do for the person that you love...keep it up girl :)

[paparapapa]

I loved the last two lines. And I agree with Swateek, you'll just have to keep on writing to do better. But great write anyway. ;)

[Swateek]

Well..you got a good flow...and thoughts are spontaneous...dats lovely...keep writing...and am sure...u'll do better.. :)

[Canicus]

I like this it's touching, nice ending. Well done.

[Seanne Tholltree]

mother's poem is really soothing..

[natzky]

hope you like it......