"Game Over"

"Game Over"

A Poem by natzky
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inspired by mem'ries of bali..:)

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"Game Over"

I don't know how and why it ended,
I just wake up and our game is over.
God knows I've tried to patched the scratch
Just to be you and me together.
But it seems each temptress intervening;
Leaving me in misery and pain.

I really thought you were different
But, hell! you're much like the rest.
Seemingly good at first, amazingly perfect!
No wonder my friends don't like you
and it's about time to forget you!

If you'd ask for another chance
I'd probably say "NO"
You push me to go through
and now I'm done with you..

-=MGCN=-

© 2012 natzky


Author's Note

natzky
it's just a piece inspired by the film mem'ries of bali...:)

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nice piece:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow nice poem natzky;-)hahahah,,,i like the line ''and now I'm done with you'''lakas ng loob.hehe,,tama yan,,bawasan n ang mga martir sa mundong ito...

Posted 12 Years Ago


natzky

12 Years Ago

hahahah...yeah, right...I'm a good person to forgive him, but not stupid enough to trust him again.... read more
wow.thanks for sharing such a great poetry with us ......i really like the diction you have used and the emotions you have put in it..........really makes it animated.......great work!!.

Posted 12 Years Ago


natzky

12 Years Ago

tnx my dear friend..:)
good job! it was an enjoyable poem with a strong message.

Posted 12 Years Ago


natzky

12 Years Ago

thanks..heheh
never seen that film,but good writing either way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


natzky

12 Years Ago

heheh..thanks for the review..;)
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Pax
it was a very sad show, great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


natzky

12 Years Ago

heheh...you've seen also the koreanovela mem'ries of bali?heheh...ganda nun dba kaso it has a very t.. read more
Pax

12 Years Ago

i just like the story line..but then..di ko na tinapos...sabi daw nila tragic daw...nag simatayan sa.. read more
natzky

12 Years Ago

exactly...bnaril ng bida ung karibal nia taz ung girl then afterwards he found out that the girl she.. read more
nice work keep it up.


Posted 12 Years Ago


natzky

12 Years Ago

thanks...for the review..;)
G O O D !

Posted 12 Years Ago


natzky

12 Years Ago

heheh...nk'capz tlagah...lol's
nice piece natz

Posted 12 Years Ago


natzky

12 Years Ago

thanks...:)heheh
hi natzky,
this one really amaze me,
well, your experience molds you to be better
=]

Posted 12 Years Ago


natzky

12 Years Ago

nakanakz....experience tlgah?lol's...
anyhow...tnx for the review musicfunk....muahhh..

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Added on September 6, 2012
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natzky
natzky

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hi,I'm 19 years old, I'm still new in the world of writing...I just write to express my sentiments and probably not to impress others. Feel free to review and comment on my works.... you can also.. more..

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