Eaten!

A Chapter by Deepshikha

Story.of.my.life. [and probably many others.]

Sitting on black chairs,
Hunched forward, wasting away,
Eaten by Facebook.

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© 2010 Deepshikha

Author's Note

So tell me, have you ever been there?

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Oh, I'm always there lol, and I'm there even NOW .. I'm kind of addicted to FB ..
Your haiku described it all .. though we know it is a waste of time, and that we should be revising at that time, we can't spend a day without logging in to FB
I like the concept 'Eaten by Facebook' which firstly means that we're so engrossed into it, and secondly it brings out the addictive aspect of 'once you're here, you cannot get out'
Nice one!
I love it, and completely relate to it
=]

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Stephanie

Totally been there, but more with the Cafe than Facebook! I'm addicted to this place, lol. Great haiku :]

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Phenomena

YES I HAVE! except with different websites lol. i loved ur haiku! great, and hilarious write!;)

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Added on August 1, 2009
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Deepshikha

Where Time Passes, PA

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This is archive for the poetry I've written, spanning back from when I first started writing in 2007. I mostly write fiction now and don't post it on here. Enjoy if you'd like. I'm Deepshikha. .. more..