Because I Love You

The greatest fools are those in love...What we won't do for that tingling feeling in our souls...

B***h was I,

That I shared my pain.

Call me pig,

I came back every time.

Idiot I am,

For crying many tears.

A*****e I was,

Because I believed in trust.

Such a loser,

For drowning in lies.

So blind,

To indifferent facade.

Weirdo is my second name,

Because I think to care.

They called me poser,

Because they hated me.

I am a f*g,

Because I have so many friends.

Damned I am,

That I though they cared.

They call me nerd,

For my wits cannot match thiers.

They said pitiful,

Because I was willing to accept.

The call me so many things,

Though I don't care.

But the biggest fool am I,

Because I loved you.

Author's Note

Feel free to critique. =]

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Very nice writing, a definite pleasure to read your poetry.

[siri]

im right there with you!!! thanks for sharing now u know ur not alone hehe

[Karlie]

WOW deepshikha i didn't know you swore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that frirst word wow!!!! well message me i want to hear about your summer.

KaRLie

[Staci Brown]

better to be a fool and experience love with an open heart than to grow old and bitter without ever taking a chance :D worry not about what others say, they're not living your life, you are hon :D

well done :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[lauren emily]

Very nice poem you got here. Everyone has been an idiot at some point or another, but..sometimes good things will out of it at the end.

[Mysty Rayn]

We have all been fools. I think this poem is very good to relate to teens. I like it.