Oppression

Well, it would be about anything, but if you look through my feminist rant, I think you'll see what I'm talking about.

I hate it.

It's painful.

The movment,

It's got to stop.

It's an oppression.

Made by men.

To torture us,

To look at us.

We don't even need it.

We can go with out it.

It's cutting into me,

And I bet's it's the wrong size.

It's not glamourous.

It's not making me beautiful.

It's just a ploy.

For them,

Those oppressors.

I want to be free of this.

I want to be natural.

I want beauty to come from me.

If they can do it,

Why can't we?

 

Author's Note

My first poem in WEEKS. Enjoy.
And try to figure out what I'm talking about.

Reviews

[Mariah]

But that's the nice thing about poetry- People can interpret it in their own way and get something different out of it than everyone else.

Honestly, if I didn't know beforehand the idea of the poem, I might have concluded something different.

I liked it. The words in italics help to emphasize important words and phrases.


kudos.

[sara!]

ohhh im in love with this. this is something i can relate to. nice job deep =)

[R.W. Blue]

wow, likey~like.
i think i know it, but............
yes deep, you most definitely ARE a feminist!
same with me, but anyways.....
um...... you should seriously write more poetry.
it really suits you, since you have a different .....view. :P

[TIFFANY!]

ohh wow! great poem...lol it's about forehead boy always looking at you huh? lol hahha nnnniiiiiicccccceeeeee good job deep! and you are a WAYYY better writer than me! thanks 4 the gift deep!i would send ppl one but i don't have enough points =[ oh well....

[Vannah]

like i said...i enjoyed it..plus i got it wrong...Yeah!!! Go Me, I'm so not smarticle!!