Do You Love Me?

Do You Love Me?

A Poem by Deepshikha
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Some of the many questions that we think of when we fall in love.

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Do you stare at me,

But I don't notice?

Do you make fun of me,

So I'll talk to you?

Do you wait for me to leave,

So you can see me with my friends?

Do you say stupid things,

So you can see me smile?

Do you try and talk to me,

But I don't listen?

Do you walk behind me,

So you can "accedently" step on my shoes?

Do you sit next to me,

So you can watch me be me?

Do you walk slowly,

So I get annoyed?

Do you flirt with other girls,

So I get jealous?

Oh and just one more thing,

Do you love me?

© 2008 Deepshikha


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Ah yes, I think we've all asked some of these questions at one point in our lives. XD I think you did a great job capturing the innocent feelings we have toward people at the start of a relationship, and the curiousity behind others' intentions. Great job! There was just one typo I noticed, it should be "accidently". (:

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Well expressed.

Questions and more questions...
We've all been through it, haven't we?

Well, I hope you find the answers soon.
Good luck.


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Ah yes, I think we've all asked some of these questions at one point in our lives. XD I think you did a great job capturing the innocent feelings we have toward people at the start of a relationship, and the curiousity behind others' intentions. Great job! There was just one typo I noticed, it should be "accidently". (:

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

I like this poem. People do random crazy things in life. When it comes to love, I think this hits the subject on the head.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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This is archive for the poetry I've written, spanning back from when I first started writing in 2007. I mostly write fiction now and don't post it on here. Enjoy if you'd like. I'm Deepshikha. .. more..

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