Rain

My haiku for March 31! It was inspired by a small trickle of water on the edge of Business 22. Which goes to show, that you can find inspiration...anywhere! ^^

Rain gently falling

Water softly trickling

Life slowly rises

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

Nice haiku. Now if you could write one about dirty snow along the highway please **joking**

[Becca :)]

i like rain. nice work. =]

[Vannah]

i....wow...

[lori c]

the imagery in this is so springy. thank you. (i was driving on ice yesterday) is this a free form or traditional haiku ? the only reason i ask is that there are six syllables in the second line instead of the traditional seven. no matter ... it's just a matter of personal preference and what you had in mind. keep writing these.

[Michael Lopez]

nice....
i use to have hiaku's
sniff...sniff.
i lost mines though