My Awakening

Um....you could call it a multi part modern haiku....Kinda ameturish...

Soft sunshine pours down

Flowers bloom beautifully

Giving life to me

 

I am soon awake

Running freely in the wind

Feeling so alive

 

Standing in the sun

I thank god for every thing

Now I am at peace

Reviews

[Becca :)]

awwww.....this is sweet. i really like it. nice work. =]