I need You

Harry Harry,can`t you see, something s seriously wrong with me.

I sit all day an do nothing, but eat yoghurt  like crazy.

The computer`s the only thing that keeps me happy.

I need you here at my side to help keep me company.

I need you here at my side so I won`t feel lonely.

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Reviews

[bathtime]

I like this cause anyone can relate to it at some point in their lives. Everyone has a desire for human company at some point, and there's nothing worse than nit being able to get it when you need it most.

I really like its simplicity as well. Good job :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I like your last few sentences. They speak of the human need for company.

[♋ Iris ♋]

Short but still good. I like it~! Thanks for posting~!

[Lizzy]

mm short, interesting cry for company. Still more to say maybe but cant with yoghurt in the mouth an spoon in hand. Its cute!

[Coyote Poetry]

Where is Harry? A interesting poem. I could feel the desire for a missed friend. A very good poem.
Coyote

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I like this, it is cute! :)

[Myrmidon]

like zero said, short, sweet and to the point. i like it. now..TO THE FRIDGE. yogurt :3

[zero binty]

I like this piece. Short and to the point. Now I also want some yogurt.

[Lina Grey]

cute and well-written. I like it. Thank you.

[Danielle]

well written (: