love spell

love spell Every time I see you my heart skips a few beats I can't wait for the next time you and I will meet I want you and only you forever I am yours and everyday I don't see you I want you more and more When I see you with other girls it makes me raged and mad and to think of never having you makes me much less than glad I want so bad to tell you the feelings I feel yet, if you actually return them then I realize it can't be real I really want to show you but how to make you see to have a life without you ...it could never be You'll never know my feelings 'cause I will never tell the only thing i'm really sure of is i'm caught in your spell

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Reviews

[zero binty]

On the other side of the fence, with the people equipped with external genetalia, the emotions you express here are deeper than you realize. And the last verse sums up ninety eight percent of what happens. We keep it to ourselves. How dumb are we? Dumb enough to stay within the comforts of routine and not take many chances. Excellent read.

[PokemonFan#1]

Its a sad and beautiful poem.

I liked it.

KEEP IT UP!

[Imagination-mage]

this is very adorable and well written. This poem has me hooked! Love love love it!!!

[RavenRoo]

Once again, this sums up my life exactly right now. I can really relate to it! It's really good. Keep it up, it's fantastic! :D

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Really passionate and emotional write!

thx for sharing!

[Sheila Kline]

And in a spell of love is the soul of your poem so vividly caught - wanting to remain mysterious, but so very much caught in the grips of emotion dripping from another!
Your flow and rhyme are well done, and the message is one many of us can relate to!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Felt this way a few times....
And the way express these feelings is spot on and perfect...
the flow is perfect too...
awesome poem :)

[_Hanabi_]

thnk you

[rockinrollkid]

o.m.g I just love this poem it`s so heart warming i can totally relate to it

[Danielle]

Wow, this is really good & descriptive! Relatable & emotional. (: