All a dream

When i was younger i had a dog named sparkles, sparkles and i were best of friends.We would play together we would go out to the park together we also went for walks.Then one day she went missing.....

When i was younger i had a dog named sparkles, sparkles and i were best of friends.We would play together we would go out to the park together we also went for walks.Then one day i went to school and came back and sparkles was missing......o how i cried i looked every where but i still could n `t find sparkles.I ran to my room and stayed there for the entire day....suddenly i started to hear this noise coming from outside my window,i looked out my window and what do u know there was sparkles ...i quickly ran out my room and headed for the door as i flung it open i saw sparkles in the middle of the road barking at me...i smiled and began to call her....as she was about to come towards me a mini van ran over her.......i screamed so hard i woke up my  dad, he came running out the house asking me what was the matter, i pointed towards the dead dog...my dad saw her and quickly covered my eyes as if that was going to help in any way...."there,there," my dad said to me as he hugged me...''it will be all right Hun,it`s not like if it meant something to U at all,'' i pushed my dad away and began to back back..when suddenly a dog barking behind me made me jump,i spun around...what i saw made me want to vomit and scream at the same time....there was sparkles but without a eye and without half her body......i closed my eyes and prayed this was all a dream, a very bad dream, when i opened it, i was in my room lying down on my bed....i jumped off my bed  and shaked my self off then went and  opened my door.......I screamed to the top of my lungs, and then thought to myself...''i thought it was all a dream''............

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[rockinrollkid]

i totally agree wit the previous writer lots of drama but really interesting!!!!!

[Light Wave]

Whew! Lots of drama ! Fast moving! Lots of feelings! Held my interest!