excuses, excuses.

the emergence of this poem was pressured by Inday Abbie. lol! but the idea in this prose poem is inspired by Gestalt Therapy Verbatim, a book to an approach on psychotherapy founded by Fritz Perls.:)

is it that hard to admit 

that what is, is just is?

then abuse and misuse

what reasons to excuse?

but is there an excuse

for the sky being blue?

or for a love being true?

you think you have a clue

but leave it alone, can you?

you ask why is a rose

is a rose is a rose?

what cause can cause 

a cause be a cause?

does reason really end?

you're mind-f*****g, my friend. 

no, you don't need to explain!

what so if you're insane?

there is no one to blame.

is there a reason for your name?

what i am is just me,

you don't ask why i came to be.

i am me and so i am free,

and i am unafraid

to show the world and let'em see

that letting it be can make us glee.

what's so wrong with genuineness? 

and with happiness? with youth?

and so what if they won't take my truth?

i would. always. 

for there no mistakes,

was simply born this way. 

i might bring you dismay

but what more can i say?

"a rose is a rose is a rose."

how's that for a good prose?

so excuse me for asking you this

but...

just don't ever make me no excuses.

Author's Note

"true words are not beautiful; beautiful words are not true." ~ Book of Tao

Reviews

[SimpleMind]

a rose is a rose is a rose.... ,crhfw'ed'hgawldWQ"jfhgaew'dldfb!!! haha

[Jane Doe]

EEEEEKKKK DODONG NAT NAT!!!!!

wow, we use to totally crazy! Lol rereading made me remember :P I now know what they say when they tell me i speak backwords (asain thing) lol
hope life is treating you well Dodong:)

In God We Trust
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100.100

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

[Siena - Silent Awakenin..]

From the way its crafted to the perfect sense of elegance and rhyme. Oh, and also how it makes you think... :) Mann I just love it!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A sliding mass of contradiction and sheer poetic brilliance, well done, good read.

[Hannah Paige]

Perfectly written, and full of such truth. this is a piece that needs to be read, and we'd all do well to abide by it

[nicolo]

ahahaha AYUS :) I writing a poem about individuality. I'm 1/4 done. ahaha well, not done --If we were in a Gestalt Lexicon Conversation. ahahaha

INDAY! HAHAHA DODONG! HAHAHAHA

[Jane Doe]

That's what I thought:)
Hehe, oh yea I won!:)
But I really really think that you won the excuse contest:P

~inday

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Excellent deep write, great stuff, love psychology aspect and its interpretation..

[leinahtan]

hahahahahahahaha. XD she's right. she's right folks, t'was just my excuse. hahahah