cold as you

fire, sooner or later, dies out.

 where is that flame 

that used to burn on my name 

 in your eyes? 

 and what used 

to be a light in your smile

 is now but a 

nonchalant despise. 

 it seems as though

you're not the girl i knew.

'cos i've never kissed 

someone who is

 

 cold as you...     

Author's Note

play with fire and dare to get burned.

Reviews

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

[Hannah Paige]

I like this, it has an almost lyrical tone. Ever think of turning it into a song?

[....]

Ouch! This one will pull at you, Ice cold love the thoughts in this. Truthful too, when you play with fire you will get burned.....xo

[Jane Doe]

But if you don't play with fire you will never know the consequence of being burned you will never feel how it feels to be taught a lesson

Playing with fire is like playing softball and you the batter but you suck at hitting your most likely to get out or in this case burned

I like this poem alot it's very emotional and beautiful:)

Love it alot keep writing:)
~abbie
100/100

[nicolo]

I just noticed ba, there's always a concluding line. ahahahahaha
The strikethrough just pawned it! :) :) :)