Escape

Each night I sleep with this lingering fear of the unknown

The darkness swallows me whole

I'm terrified

 

I prayed to meet my love


To see you, to know you

Now each night when I close my eyes its you I dream of

 

With you I am safe, I'm happy

I feel whole again yet I never see your face

 

I wake up with traces of your touch on my skin

And the trail of your love on my heart

 

It tortures me to only have scattered memories of you in my mind

Pieces of an important puzzle I'm desperate to put together

 

I prayed for you to be known to me

Now I'm praying for you to escape my dreams and come into my reality

Reviews

[ANM]

Lovely writing, full of emotion well done!!

[wordman]

a yearning heart very good write

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you very much my friend

[Stephen]

Nice imaginary! You've got a warm fire in your heart about love. The poem's about your dreams, destiny and love ...which's tumbling down over the crests of your beautiful wolfy heart. I love the font you used here, it's a bit matched with the tumblr font ..isn't it? And I love this one and heyy...keep writing your upcoming stuffs with the same font as long as you don't get bother .. lol I'd love to read few more in this font.

Beautiful poem!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you for reading

[Pinkyleeamy]

Nice one. Pieces of an important puzzle I'm desperate to put together!! Love that line. It's just shows the intensity and the willingness and the yearning of wanting more than what you have at that moment. Really great poem!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you're able to see the emotion in it. Really happy you liked it :)

[Chris Micha]

It's the Guardian of your dreams ;)~

I don't know how I missed this one. You have done an amazing job here, Natalie. It's so rich in emotion and it's bleed through your work here. Amazing job ma'am!!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Well said. He is the Guardian of my dreams :)
I wish he was real though...
Thanks for reading Christian its always nice seeing your review :)

[Chris Micha]

He just might be ;)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

This is true :)

[Awakened Rose]

Wow. this poem was beautiful. True love awaits my dear :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Yes it does and it will find me when its time :)
Thanks for the kind review.

[Mary Ochoa]

Beautiful words you have written out! I really enjoyed this read friend! :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you so much my friend. I'm glad you liked it :)

[saumya]

its from your heart, and that's why it connects with others. Good one, mate :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you very much :)

[A. Amos]

Will definitely come in reality, such a plea if God hear he will come and visit you...he is just a man:)

As always buddy felt your words, straight from your heart...somply epic!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

He hears me :)
You know me, the helpless romantic.
Thank you buddy :)

[A. Amos]

i know that and your words rant that loudly about you:) You're most welcome

[melissa]

This is a really beautiful poem keep up the great work i hope to read more of your poems

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you :)

[melissa]

You're welcome