Cure Me

As I dream at night I try my best not to dream of you,

yet I always do.

When I close my eyes I pray that you don't haunt my thoughts, 

yet you always do. 

Why is it that my mind can't wipe out the existence of you? 

Though I still question if our love was ever true, I prat to God for only the best for you. 

Why do I still hold on to the hope of me and you? 

When clearly the lose of me from your life as done nothing to you. 

I fill my thoughts with the hope of new love and a cherished heart. 

I've dedicated years of my life into what was to be our future, its scary to have to restart. 

I swear I see your face at every corner I turn. 

I just want it to stop, every blood cell in my heart burns. 

Can someone help me before I go insane,

I'm searching for the cure of this disease called pain.

Reviews

[Kieta!]

This is awesome! I love it :) Great job!!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm happy you liked it.

[Shirlena]

Love when not returned is not cute at all and this piece really places the reality of the experience close up, nose to nose and personal. It is easy to feel every bit of angst your voice can muster. Good yet sobering for those of us who have traveled these emotion a time then some.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Yeah, I was oozing with so much emotion and pain, I just had to write it about to heal somewhat...read moreYeah, I was oozing with so much emotion and pain, I just had to write it about to heal somewhat...
Thanks for reading and review!

[Shirlena]

Writing really does help you look at and then move it along. it really is therapy that way.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Yes it is. Without writing a lot of people would see the not so sweet side of me lol...
It helps with vocalizing your emotions but unfortunately it doesn't erase the feelings.

[Shirlena]

I know the feelings take time.

[dakarai]

This is a great piece. It sounds like the lyrics of a song. You definitely did a good job expressing yourself

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you for taking the time to read my work and for the kind review. I truly appreciate it :)

[Awakened Rose]

I absolutely love your writing and the way you capture your emotions. You kind of let them flow out piece by piece. Love it!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Writing is my way of releasing my emotions without judgment. In a sense its therapy for me.
Thanks for the review :)

[melissa]

Awesome poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you.
I will :)

[melissa]

Your welcome

[emmajoy]

That final line says more than a book; it's spilling over in feelings of anguish. Your poem as a whole is almost a plea for answers, for reasons to 'what happened and why to us?' I truly hope and pray that your feelings calm as time eats your sad words and absorbs your salty tears.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you for your kind words :)
It is a plea for answers, answers I might never get but that's okay. Everything in life is a lesson, even pain...

[Stephen]

I hate watching someone as creative n beautiful as you get pain. The doors of love are always open for angels for of course, you'd get find love someday with whom you'll live and re-start your life to make it gratifying living for life. That lucky guy how left a mark on you put you on pain now and left you alone in the world, you want to re-start you life without making more mistakes..without letting anybody go leave marks on you anymore cus, now you desire to consume the drops of loves from someone who keeps you into the depth of his heart not under his shed. Your themes're real, I liked the way of your working. You truly express your feelings via words into many forms of verbs.

Keep Writing!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Yeah pain is never a fun thing to go through but it has inspired me to write some good stuff lol. In life we live and we learn.

Thank you for taking time to read my work and leaving a review.

[Stephen]

Ha! You make me smile.
Yup, sometimes, reality seemed beautiful for inspiring us ourselves by our lives's moments we live with someone into the arms of petals. Am glad you turned your reality into words to let your feelings go out the heart making readers feel how angelic you are.

It's always my pleasure to read your stuffs.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

I always say I express my emotions through writing :)

[Stephen]

Good! Keep purring your immortal angelic heartbeat loving shining sizzling emotions into the words letting us feel the power of love and of course consuming the drops of love via words with the scent of yours ... with the heart of an angel :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

I will try my best :)

[Stephen]

You make me smile again. Yeah, Angels always do their best making the world beautiful to live so, all the best for your success, keep making the world peaceful with your scents.
My wishes are always with you, Keep writing and smiling, pretty one :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you :)

[Chris Micha]

The only cure is love & time, for which some lucky guy out there will give you. Beautiful Natalie! :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Yeah everyone keeps telling me that lol. I'm being patient.
Thank you Christian :)

[Mindolluin]

I have no experience in broken hearts (or love at all) but this.. I don't even know how to put it. I just want you to know that this was strong text with beautiful words and it surely is full of emotion.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you very much for the review and for taking the time to read my work.
:)