Sing Me To Sleep

Sing me to sleep,
lead me to dreams,
forget the day,
tonight, just stay,
follow me to,
dreams of all hues,
we can float there,
smiles we'll share,
Sing me to sleep,
count the white sheep,
morning will come,
delay the sun,
let's hide in clouds,
make Sandman proud,
in dream we'll spin,
until light wins.

Reviews

[Hiddenfire]

The poem has a sort of relaxed rhyming form that makes it feel like a lullaby the more I read it. One thing I would suggest, for the 11-12th lines I would add the word 'when' to the start: "when morning will come, delay the sun." adds that little extra oomph of longing to it.

[Mark D]

Thanks I really enjoyed that. The title drew me to it (An amazing Smiths song)

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Such a simple sweet write. Love the rhyme scheme once again. Amazing!