Just Fine

I'm just fine,
there's nothing on my mind,
sometimes I forget to think,
sometimes I forget to blink,
but I'm just fine,
I'm just fine,
I'm just fine,
in the mornings I awake,
I light a cigarette,
try to clear my head,
so I can go back to bed,
cause my brain can't support,
the heartbeats that stop short,
at the thought of your death,
let me lay down my head,
so I'll be fine,
I'll be fine,
I'll be fine,
just give me time,
I promise I won't hide,
though my eyes are shut tight,
the sun is too bright
for sleep to come back tonight.

Reviews

[Hiddenfire]

I think fine is one of the only word used nowadays when the opposite is how your really feeling, and of course this poem show cases that nicely. I also loved the repetition as has been stated, it really drives the heart and beat of the poem.

[ATG]

A very interesting and well written poem.

[Sujash I. Purna]

The rhyming is excellent! I really liked the repetition of some words! Very nice!

[....]

Love the emotions in this, well expressed.

[Drowning with Stars]

I can really feel the emotion in this

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The perfect sense of being in your own mind at any none business moment, in ones life, well done, good read.