I Love you.

That day, that great day i met you, you were perfect

your short auburn hair, your gentle blue eyes 

looking down onto me like a swirling pool of turquoise  water

the way you talk to me, not like i'm younger than you , like you respect me, 

The way you looked at me, but most of all ,

The moment our lips locked in a trance, some kind of spell.

Drawing us together, slowly, slowly, i felt the magic wash over me, 

the way you held me like you didn't want to let me go...

the way we spent the night together, that one special night,

All the times you said you had never met someone like me before,

the sweetest things you whispered in my ear...

the amazing feeling you gave me whenever i saw you..

But, Why did you have to end something so perfect?

something so real...

I Love You.

Reviews

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

Wow that ending ripped me to pieces, so passionate, rare sight. Great write man.

All the best,

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Aww :( this is sad :( xx

[+Naomi+]

:( I don''t like the ending. Unfair! I saw a perfect love story forming yet it ended...I wasn't expecting that at all. Great work :] Keep writing!!

100/100

[~Lizzy♬]

This is so cute! I love the romance and feelings you poured into this! :)

~Lizzard~