never leave me.

never leave me.

A Poem by NathanRandomDude♥

The first time i met you the shyness took over me

the look on your face made me know youd be with me

the happiness we had for the short time only

was good while it lasted , but now we're just lonely

 

i wish you would see sense i really do

the way you looked at me on that sunny afternoon

the look on your face made me know that you'd be with me

guess know i know i can never trust my instincts, but whatever you do

please never leave me.

© 2011 NathanRandomDude♥


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Like a true tailor stitching the very fibres of his emotions into their work. Great ! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


great message, but "know" and "now" are different words. good job though

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww, this is so cute!

Who would leave you? I wouldn't :P xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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NathanRandomDude♥
NathanRandomDude♥

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Hi My Name Is Nathan, I am 15 Years Old and from Darlington, I have a lot of great friends, and some People i hate a lot too, i cant stand two faced people and i have some people i love to pieces!! :'.. more..

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