Lost.

He sits there at the end of his bed,

Fists raised filled with dread

worrying about the challenge ahead

Tomorrows the day he competes in the race

can he win? Yes? No?

You watch this space.

 

By the end of the race the boy turns around,

runs away quickly,

No where to be found.

 

He's Lost, Himself and his game

LOST.

 

Reviews

[Sothe (White Princess)]

so moving....lots of emotion behind the piece. You can tell there was a lot of thinking and anticipation involved, a sad ending though. Then again sad endings can provide twists at times....so I like it. A well done piece and good read.

[Mariah Jane]

Wow... This is very deep and filled with sadness. I can honestly feel for the person that this is about. I like it. I really want the person to know that there is always a way to win... even when one has lost. This is fabulous. Keep it up!

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is goooooood :) x

[Kenneth The Poet]

Not bad. You have talent, young padewan. Nurture it, foster it, fire it up and let it become the full Jedi it's meant to be as you grow older and gain wisdom.