You.

You. made me feel like i wasnt worth it.

You. Made my life hell.

You. Are the one who locked me in my room.

You. Are the person who made me feel doomed.

 

But After all at the end of the day, your still my mum and i love you till my dying day.

Reviews

[~Lizzy♬]

This is soooo vivid, my friend. I'm so sorry that this happened to the speaker in the poem. It's a beautiful poem, but it made me tear up. It's a beautiful poem that has such power and intense emotions to it. Wonderful piece.

~Lizzard~

[TJ]

Wow this is freaking intense!!! Very in your face very gritty!! Perfectly crafted ad a nice flow to boot! Good job

[Mariah Jane]

Wow. This is harsh, deep and very vivid. This is very intense and inspiring poem. I feel bad for the victim in it. Your writing describes it very well. You should keep it up...And hang in there.

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Aww, You have the mind to make great poetry x

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice. You've expressed the mindset of an abuse victim quite vividly.