Flash Fic. "Her", "Fallen", and "BestGMA48"

Flash Fic. "Her", "Fallen", and "BestGMA48"

A Story by Nathaniel Lufkin
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Three Flash fiction stories

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Her


Being with her brings me joy.

I never understood this feeling.

I looked into her eyes.

What to say?

My tongue won’t move.

She spoke.

“Do you love me as you loved her?”

I was surprised.

I’m at a loss.

I paused, perhaps longer than I should have.
I looked down and I replied.

“...No...”


Fallen


I was among an angel.

He stood behind me,

And whispered in my right ear.

I was blinded by his beauty and words.

I did as he wished yet didn’t notice the voice coming from my left.

I listened to the temptations.

Afterwards, all I felt was guilt.

Afterall,

There are those who followed Him.


BestGMA48


This means war

You aren't getting in my way again

I can’t stand it

I shall humiliate you

Squeeze my finger

Shots fired

Response and counter-response

Over and over

Time is reaching the end

Quickly type in the needed numbers

Reach over

Press the large red button

‘BID’

That Tupperware cost you $275.99, BestGMA48

© 2015 Nathaniel Lufkin


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I like it too...sharp...subtle. I think the first one is best.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this too. Sharp..subtle.I like the first one best.

Posted 9 Years Ago


niceee.... I like it :)... You are very talented.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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