Tom's Friend Jack

Thinking back, it was always the pretty one.

 

Having that extra smile; giving that extra kiss. It was just something to know.

Yeah, that's right. "Know"...pish.

 

Sometimes it seems the fence is everything I've got. Jack got the kiss, and I'm stuck serving the drinks.

 

...Maybe it's the lipstick I'm wearing?

Reviews

[~Angelic~]

hmm definately odd, but I did understand it somewhat. I do like how it is short and to the point, since it doesn't matter about the length but the meaning in the poem.

Very intrigued though, hope to see more of your work

[~angelalala~]

mysterious in its confusion. but oddly i like it. short & simple. a person has to read it a few times to make sense of it. but the way you wrote it, not explaining much, is intrigueing.

[.:Naiira Harlow:.]

Odd, but understandable. The pretty ones always get the extra smile or kiss. It might not be the lipstick, but maybe its just the person.