Short Horror Story. Should I continue?

Very short. Please quickly read. Don't tell me about spelling mistakes! Should I keep writing? Tell me, assuming I was 100% gramatically accurate, am I a publishable writer?

Strange pains on my wrists and ankles interupted my sleep. I was awake but way too groggy to open my eyes.

"You don't want to wake up." Whispered a slithering voice. I was supposed to be home alone. That realization jolted the rest of my conscious and eyes awake. The light just above me left me with temporary blindness of a large circle in the middle of my vision. As my eyes slowly adjuested to the light, I noticed that I was freezing and not in my bed. I wasn't in my room, nor my house! My mind processed this very slowly, just like how I am all mornings. I tried to lean forward but couldn't. I Paniced at the view of myself confined by chains around my wrists and ankles to a table. By now I could see around me. I was in a large fishbowl like room. The walls were rusted and there were no windows or doors. The light just above me was the only light. It was almost as if I were to be displayed.

I was to scared to scream. Even though my body wanted to ragefully seizure, I was frozen. I wanted to scream at the top of my lungs, but all I did was wimper out a cowardly, high pitched, "Hello?" I didn't even quite open my mouth to let it out.

"Hello." The voice flooded my ears from behind as I could feel the mans warm, moist breath on the top back of my head. Goosebumps jumped out the back of my neck. It only felt colder on the cold metal table I was chained to.

"You don't want me. I'm just some stubborn kid." I continued, "If you want to harm me or hear me scream, like some twisted f**k, I wont co-operate!" I felt him take a slightly long breath through his mouth.

"Are you afraid of the dark?" He whispered into my right ear. I refused to respond. He then extended his pale, veiny arm over my shoulder towards the chain that turns the light off.

"Click." Not only did that take the light away, it even seemed to have create a black, beyond pure darkness.

"If not, of course, you can watch your own guts spew into my mouth!" He couldnt help but let a gigle flee his mouth." I will rip out your heart above you! I will ring it over your head, raining you, with your own blood!" He went on. I felt a cold rusty blade rub up my thigh. " Of course, that would be the finale...and whats a finale without the rest of the show?"   

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar unless theres a world that isnt read-able. Is this scary? Am I good for a 17 year old?

Reviews

[Christina Jared (Typica..]

I like it, I'd love to read more because I was absolutely captivated. It was almost as if I was there. Once you develop the characters and story a little more, then this will be awesome. But yeah, that's just my two cents. I like it.

[Alexis]

creepy story gives me goosebumps!!