Time

well, this was kind of on the spot.. like 10 minutes ago, but it was very inspiring to myself so i wanted to share. hope you guys enjoy

While yesterday,

The strings of the heart

Played violently apart

For today is only now,

And tomorrow could mean no foul.

Author's Note

drop a comment of what you think?!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Proper flow of thoughts and words in the poetry. Today is opportunity and tomorrow is chance. Thank you Nately for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Planet x]

Interesting , you use words in a vert elegant and smart way to express yourself. I love this one

[Natehy]

that is a first for me, "elegant"... i like it. Thank you!

[SZHZIA]

It is very short but consists of past, presents and future. I agree with Snow Angel that you should add more.
Best
Szhzia

[Natehy]

Thank you lots SZHZIA.

[SZHZIA]

was my pleasure, and you are welcome. :-)

[Harley Quinn]

I love it. I think you should add more!

[Natehy]

Maybe i'll commit to your request :-)
Thanks S.A.

[mournful bear]

beautifully philosophical so much said in such few word!! GREAT penning!!

[wordman]

but tomorrow never comes,today is yesterdays tomorrow,and tomorrow will soon be today,and tomorrow never comes

[Natehy]

"but tomorrow never comes" that reminds me of a song :)

[Ayvid N]

If we set our sight on tomorrow, tomorrow will be a let down. Forhet the past. Live in the moment, no expectations, no heartbreaks.