i don't know what I'm gonna call it yet

i don't know what I'm gonna call it yet

A Poem by nate the great
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More lovey dovey stuff

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I don't know how or when
but it was like a virus spreading from my heart my love for you,
you planted the seed without knowing
all you knew was you played a song
a song that reached down into my soul
then I knew you were more than just "that girl"
you were the girl of my dreams
you say "my past is too horrible how do you love me?"
But I see right through all of that sadness
I see the broken girl within
and I try desperately to piece her back together because
I love her despite her flaws
in my eyes she is and always will be beautiful

© 2014 nate the great


Author's Note

nate the great
Ugh I'm so mushy lol

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I love this write it makes me feel well loved as the subject of this one it makes it hard to review it has such emotions and a suggestion for a title maybe you can call it "love sees no flaws " or " with love there is no flaw "

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is very sweet and I enjoyed reading! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


That was so awee hehe... well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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a very good try, knowing what's love is, is still the best feeling of all. very nice piece...

Posted 10 Years Ago


nate the great

10 Years Ago

Thank you now all I need to do is get my girlfriend to look at it sneakily

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