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A Poem by carla

 

Why did you leave me?
Why did you have to go?
Because of you I am sitting here all alone
Wishing that someday you’d come back to me
But now I know I it can never be
Please someone come and rescue me

© 2009 carla


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Hm Short and Sweet although it isn't really sweet and I think that is the whole point of the saying...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and to the point. Grabs your attention and you definitely know the sorrow behind the words. You are a great talent. I wished I could write poetry like this.
Gorgeous work

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful. I really liked it...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 2, 2009

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