tear

a tear falls but no one sees

a tear falls but no one cares

a tear falls

i don't feel any more

i don't smile

all emotion is dried up

my heart broken and black

could there really be a life when you have nothing in you?

will i ever find someone/ something that will put an end to all this

i wonder as i sit here in this world that dosen't see past what they want to see

is there something better out there?

a tear falls but without feeling or meaning

will there come a time when tears will fall and they bring meaning again?

i wonder as my last tear falls

Author's Note

depressing huh?

Reviews

[Casper Cross]

Yes, very depressing... but very well written, I really enjoyed it. It has a nice rhythm that stays consistent throughout the piece. Nice work.

[Ratikant]

Good one :-)