Bedroom Jungle

Bedroom Jungle

A Poem by Natalia
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A silly poem describing the messiness of some teenager's room.

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Closet trees covered with books galore,

There's an ocean of dirty clothes, hey look, some underwear on the shore.

Disgusting creatures on the ground,

Like moldy sandwich spiders; there's more coming out of that mound.

 

And then the bed, oh please, not the bed!

It's so revolting! Once I saw it shed!

Wrappers, chips, dusty gifts from grandma,

Look under it, I think I see a llama.

 

The small desk is so loud, yet quiet.

All those unfinished homework elephants are making a riot.

Overturned coke cans, is that my brother?

He's drowning in that pencil bush, let's hope there's not another.

 

I feel bad for the owner of this mess, the shame!

This place is not at all tame.

But if you remove the mess in front of the door (it's a real bundle),

There's a sign that says; Welcome to my Bedroom Jungle.

 

 

 

© 2015 Natalia


Author's Note

Natalia
I will add a picture later, guys.

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It's somehow complex, difficult to understand from the beginning, but as it goes towards the end, it started showing up its meaning.
It's a good nice one, bringing out your beautiful art work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Natalia

8 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on August 17, 2015
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Tags: silly, poem, bedroom, jungle, bedroom jungle, messy, messiness, funny

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