We suddenly died

About how we die suddenly with out a warning about it!!

This is the story about why we all died because of me!!

 

It all happened when I was at school we all were walking round with busy corridors and teachers getting stressed about what they are going to do. So it was really a normally day for us nothing unusual about it at all.

Well that is what we thought well we all where walking round and then we had a fire dill this was only fir the new year7’s that did not know what they where doing, we all walked at doing what we all normally do and we all when to the right collages. After a while we all got to go back inside out of the freezing cold but we had to go to lesson that was the bad things about. As we walking in we could hear the teachers talking about something that was going to happen, we did not think that it was any thing so we just carried on walking to class.

As we got to the first lesson we could tell that the teacher was acting weird but we did not really know why. We wanted to find out what was going on so when we were doing are work me and my mates walked over to the teacher to see what was going on but he said not to worry and to get on with the work that we are doing. As we sat down he started to talk to his self.  We knew that something was going to happen but what was it, if only they told us what was going on.

Author's Note

Hope you like the start of the story.

Reviews

[Layla Night]

i love the start of your story it is awesome. keep working on it. i can tell that it is going to be great!

[My Fair Lady]

Alright- The idea is good. Needs some spell check and punctuation work. I could see it progressing though :)