fear

fear

A Chapter by natalie jones
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430 am negative thinking

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okay well I've come to the conclusion that humans are alone. humans are rare things that happened in some sort of crazy disaster.  the capacity of the human brain does not have the intellectual range needed to grasp the concept of being completely abandoned. so we make up things to make us feel safe. like time. time is just an imaginary limit that was man made to comfort humans in a way to feel as if we have more "time" to live when realistically anything could happen at any moment therefor breaking the walls of time, fear conquers all. humans made up god, to comfort them so they feel taken care of and not so alone. there is no god. there is however a higher power, and that is fear itself.  crazy isn't it?


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I don’t necessarily agree that we’re alone but I do agree that humans always tend to feel perpetually alone. I would say this is because (and I do believe in evolution in a way) that we’re designed to live in small tight-knit groups by nature (look at a troop of chimps for instance). So nothing feels more alone than say walking down the streets of Seattle where it’s bustling with people don’t, and won’t ever, know. As they say, there’s nothing to fear but fear itself


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