she loved.

simple poem about love.

She had a beautiful,

selfless soul.

She gave and she gave,

and asked for nothing in return.

 

She gave her laughter,

her care,

her kisses,

her love.

 

But he is hungry,

he is insatiable.

So he took and he took,

and gave nothing in return

 

He took her laughter,

her care,

her kisses,

her love.

 

He took and he took,

until she stood,

a distorted image,

of who she used to be.

Reviews

[kogomai1]

this poem was superb, when i read it, i couldn't stop thinking about.... well how many people are out there, and the futility of a perfect relationship. but at the same time this poem showed me that there is ALWAYS one more sweet girl out there, who can show me that the entire world hasn't sunk into debauchery
awsome poem, and keep writing you've got a knack
-james

[Natalie]

Wow! Thank you for your wonderful comment :) and thank you so much for stopping by!

[kogomai1]

your welcome :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

she gave n gave, and now she stands still with nothing but fear of trusting blindly!!
i loved this one. Thanks for sharing maam.

[Natalie]

Thank you! I really appreciated your comment :)

[Kuldeep desai]

nice well written......keep it up.......

[Natalie]

Thank you! :)