Jars Of Eyes

My first horror write..

Don’t worry my love

For when you sleep tonight

I’ll watch over you

There’s no need to fight

Let me take whats mine

I’ll claw out the light

That has burrowed in your eyes

And given you sight

There’s no need to fear

I’ll just take what I find

A life for a life

But I’ll keep you aligned

Your casket will be open

For the world to see

What I took from you

For what you did to me

Your heart will be missing

I set that part free

But your eyes will be mine

For my cup of tea

I took back the jar

That held my two eyes

Then popped them back in

So I could watch you cry

Reviews

[Lorry]

The ending kinda turns it around and spins it on it's head, what a wonderful way to finish such a dark write, than to turn your suffering into the joy of seeing the pain you once felt, felt by the cause. Great job.

[Ashley]

Wow, that is interesting, Horrific but at the same time, containing an element of love, even if it is quite creepy.