broken cloud

She could see her life pass in a cloud. A cloud so beautiful. She wanted to jump to it. Feel its softnes. Have its comfort. Oh what a beauty it was. But why, why was her life moving with it. Why could she see her love, her heart and soul within it? Why did this beautiful coud feel with tears. So soultry and real. Each falling and burning her like a witch at a stake. Why did its tears have his face? Why did they have his taste? Why? She felt them fal and burn her soul, she saw a light and tried to reach out. But the lightening struck her once again. Breaking her down. Oh what a cloud it was, what beauty it possesed and what hurt it unleashed. Why did it not move past her, why was it hovering around every path she crossed! Why

Author's Note

just a little thing that came to mind when i was lookin at a cloud

Reviews

[Nastia]

thank u sooo much i was just thinkin dont even remembr what i wrote hehebt tanx

[M.Babu]

As i said abit earlier i love the level of emotion in this piece of yours! You are growing so quickly as a writer and your maturation is something i deeply can't wait for- I'm confident you'll be unstoppable when that day comes! And take care of the spelling typos:)

Loved this part the most:
"Why could she see her love, her heart and soul within it? Why did this beautiful coud feel with tears. So soultry and real. Each falling and burning her like a witch at a stake. Why did its tears have his face? Why did they have his taste? Why? She felt them fal and burn her soul, she saw a light and tried to reach out."