Sweet dreams
A Poem by
Arman
Sweet dreams
It’s just my sweet dreams In which you love me But my dreams are my lifeYou have to trust me We won't know each otherUnless in unity We are meant to loveI experience in my dreams We both being togetherHopefully my dreams will come true
© 2017 Arman
Author's Note
I really need for yours advice, instruction or honestly reviews.
Reviews
All the woman seem to like it my Friend write on.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
hahaha. thanks
awe this is adorable!!! :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
awe this is adorable!!! :)
This is adorable! I can really feel your emotions tword the girl! Hope to hear more about her in the future!!😊
Posted 8 Years Ago
This is adorable! I can really feel your emotions tword the girl! Hope to hear more about her in the future!!😊
Its very sweet poem and very romantic. i love it ! Keep it up !!
Posted 8 Years Ago
Its very sweet poem and very romantic. i love it ! Keep it up !!
8 Years Ago
thanks for sweet review.
Very romanticised thoughts. Good portrayal of dream thoughts and relatable.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Very romanticised thoughts. Good portrayal of dream thoughts and relatable.
8 Years Ago
thanks so much.
reminds me of the song sweet dreams of you by patsy cline,great write
Posted 8 Years Ago
reminds me of the song sweet dreams of you by patsy cline,great write
8 Years Ago
thanks a lot.
Oh my goodness. This is so romantic! I LOVE this! xx Very well done good sir. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
Oh my goodness. This is so romantic! I LOVE this! xx Very well done good sir. :)
8 Years Ago
that is right.
from the heart, And that's what matters.
Will
Posted 8 Years Ago
from the heart, And that's what matters.
Will
Yes, I think many people can relate to this, we all hope that our dreams will come true. Only in time will we know if they do, or if other dreams far greater than we can ever imagine take their place.
Good job!
Posted 8 Years Ago
Yes, I think many people can relate to this, we all hope that our dreams will come true. Only in time will we know if they do, or if other dreams far greater than we can ever imagine take their place.
Good job!
8 Years Ago
good review, thanks
8 Years Ago
^^ You're welcome!
Lovely poem!
I didn't see any problems with your English.
Keep on writing!!
Posted 8 Years Ago
Lovely poem!
I didn't see any problems with your English.
Keep on writing!!
8 Years Ago
thank you, its all from your encourage or advising, i will keep it by yours helping.
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Added on March 9, 2016
Last Updated on November 23, 2017
Author
Arman jalalabad, Afghanistan
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i come to this world for sometime!
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