It’s just my sweet dreams In which you love me But my dreams are my life You have to trust me We won't know each other Unless in unity We are meant to love I experience in my dreams We both being together
I really like this poem. I think there is a lot of depth here along with a lot of emotion. You do a good job at showing the love that is felt and how the dreams are encompassing his life. Good job!
"I experience in my dreams
We both being together"
Although this is grammatically correct it would read better as
"I experience in my dreams
Both of us together"
Perhaps, come to me and let my dreams come true - ? or - let me take you in my arms and make my dreams come true - ? Makes it more personal, more connected to the loved one. Beautiful sentiment.
I'm not lover of love poems or love stories but this reminded me of a dream I had last night where Leonardo de caprio was my boyfriend and it was amazing, so yeah this poem worked for me today.