be happy

a short poem, its not that good.

You push me down

    stair

         by

            stair

you tear me

    p   i   e   c    e

by

    p   i   e    c    e

you break me

    bone

by

       bone

you make me feel

           smaller

and

                smaller

you play

 

tug     of    war

with my emotions

then

       tell

             me

to wear a

 

  S              e

      m   i  l

and

      be       

        h a p p y?

   

Reviews

[One Metallic Teardrop]

I love this type of writting where the words are imitated by visual symbols

[Tasha]

i loved this roller coaster you created and how you made the font smaller to emphasize how you felt. this was amazing.

[dare to fall?]

lovelovelovelove

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I never really liked this style of writing, mostly because some of them I've read never made much sense to me. But this one I could read easily. Good flow of emotion, great write! I enjoyed this.

[roy mccarthy]

nice rollercoaster of a write,
great poem and awesome layout!

[Zi]

This is beautifully executed! The format fits so well to the words and emotions that you have flowing here. Keep up the great work!

[Butterfly Ninja :3]

its amazing emily :)

[Jess Holden]

Mhm be happy that you are this amazing of a writer dear :) i love the format