FREEDOM AT17

FREEDOM AT17

A Story by narayana reddy
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IT IS A STORY OF A BOY WHO GOT LIMITLESS FREEDOM AT17

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FREDOM AT 17

 

 

In life every situation may not effect you, but in life there will be some situations they could change your life completely.

 

LIFE is all about how you see every situation and how you take it. Every situation has tow sides like positive and negative. it’s all about what you take from that particular situation decides your future.

I never thought that life will be so difficult and painful, within days everything has changed, which I dreamed for my future is collapsed by one man whom I never met. He came into my life as tsunami and vanished my future and everything which I had dreamed.

 

 Yes itis all done in a one moment, which make me to take a wrong decision in anger and frustration.

 

At the age of19 it is hard to control our thoughts, It is a age were we feel like there is no one in world who could stand in front of me, and there are lot of chances to get addicted to new world which is filled with drugs,smoking,girls,alcohol,etc.

Now I am going to tell you a story of a boy who excited more than others at the age of18, and who wanted to do anything that comes into his mind.

Let me first introduced the boy and his family, boy was born and brought up in (tallur)village, near ongole, Andhrapradesh. his father was a framer, mother was a housewife and he had one brother name anil. The boy studied untill7th in his village, later his father decided to join him and his brother in hostel so they went to Vijayawada, it was the first time the boy saw the city and it’s culture, later the boy completed his studies upto+2 there it self. After completion of +2 the boy decided to do degree near to his village, so he decided to do it in ongole by staying in hostel.

 

It’s a story of a boy who completed his +2 and entered in graduation where he got a limitless freedom at 17. It is a first class of his graduation, when  he entered into class he felt like a fish market because there were around 50-60members in a small room and noise also seems like same as fish market, then he stood at a door for a minute and thinking where to sit, later he went to second bench from last and sat there very soon he listened a voice hello I am vamsi and u then boy replied I am I(let us assume boy name is I)later common introduction continued in between conversation vamsi introduced his friend Hariteja(who is busy with girls),later another voice came from behind hello I am seshu then I introduced himself, in between conversation of I and seshu suddenly a group of boys started laughing out lauder, then seshu asked vamsi what happened then vamsi explained situation that hariteja asked a name of a girl she replied I don’t know my name then hari asked her are u from mental hospital, then she replied if u speak another word with me then I will hit u with chapple, then sashu and I started laughing, later with some laughs and some boring classes first day of collage ended, friends who I met In class was all are outers who will come daily collage by bus so they all left by5:00pm.where I was living in a hostel.

I went straight to hostel room there I found another person, I introduced himself to vishnu, with in less time they both became goodfriends and later I asked shall we go for a movie, and they went for a movie and had some food outside and again they went there hostel room and slept. The next day morning vishnu asked I shall we go to class then I asked which branch r u then vishnu replied chemistry ,I felt little bit sad because he his not the same group, I went to class and completed collage  by5:00pm I went straight to room and vishnu also came to room they both started talking about  class and there likes and dislikes, they both noticed that they have interest in boxing vishnu suggested for buying for a boxing bag I also accepted for it, without wasting time they brought boxing bag and filled it with sand completely and hanged it in there room days went on I got some other new friends and vishnu also, every evening they used to practice boxing on that.

one day vishnu got to know that there is a boxing coach wo teaches for free, later I and vishnu went to him and introduced themselves to coach his name is harish, and he accepted to teach them boxing for free, they both joined later I and vishnu were introduced to other members who are taking coaching under him they welcomed us well and we all became good friends, daily I and vishnu will go for coaching 2hours in the morning and evening like this days used to passed on.

 But one day I suddenly got disturbed in the class while chatting with friends it’s because of a smile of a girl and I focused on that girl and fell in love with that girl’s smile and eyes later whole the day I stared at her, after collage I followed her till the bus later she disappeared in bus at that moment I felt like my heart is going away. Later i came to know her name details with help of his friends (let us assume her name as (s)). In the same day he came to know that it was her birthday, I wanted to wish her but she left, then I went to class at night and I took a paper and wrote (belated happy birthdays), and came back from class. Next day I was eagerly waiting for her reply s replied as (thank you, but who r u) I saw it felt very happy, then I replied as (if u want to know who I am then come to collage to by 8:30am) he wrote in the letter and kept at her place. Next day s came to the collage she saw latter and replied as,( no I won’t come), later I read the letter but didn’t gave any reply, next day I went to collage by8:00am and waiting for her, after waiting for half-hour, s came to class with her friend she saw I, then I saw s and smiled at her, later I went to s and asked u said u won’t come then y did u came, then s replied as I didn’t came  to see u our bus came early today ok she said, then there eyes were in contact for few seconds, later after few minutes classes started I used to stare at s and s also used to see I It continued whole day at end of the collage s showed a letter to I and kept at her bench, later I went to collage at night to see what she wrote in letter, s asked (y r u staring at me) it is what she wrote in the latter, then I replied as (don’t u know y I am staring at u  and I asked for her number). Next day I was eagerly waiting for s reply. Next day s replied as( I understood your feelings but it’s not going to happen what you think), I replied as (ok but i will not stop loving you, I wrote his number and said u can call me any time if you want), I will be waiting. Next day s saw the letter and saw the I with anger, then s replied as (don’t wait I will not call you bye). later I saw the letter but this time he didn’t replied for that and he left the class the with a smile. I knew that s will call him tonight, as I expected I got a missed call from unknow number around10:00pm, then I called back to her number, but she cut the call, then I came to a clarity that she was s then i sent a message

i-hi

s-hi

i-who are you.

S-u don’t know me

i-yes, but u said u will not call me

s-yes, I said so what

i-nothing! Y did u called me

s-u don’t know y I called you

i-how could I know y did u called me

s-ok! Then byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

i-wait,wait,waitttttttttttttttttttttttttt, let me guess.

s-ok! Guess it

i-may be for accepting

s-nooooooooooooooooo

i-for what u said no

s-!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i-for whatttttttttttttttt

s-stop it, don’t you know

I-i know but, I want to here from you

s-stop imaging I didn’t call for what you are expecting.

i-then why

s-to tell you that don’t waste your time by following me.

I-can I ask you one thing?

s-what?

i-y are u thinking about me?

s-i am not thinking, I am just warning.

i-ok y are u warning

s-because

i-because

s-good night, good bye

i-u didn’t answer my question

i-good night, sweet dreams.

Later Conversation ended between I and s. next day when s was in class I went to her and asked y did u warned me about my carrier, then s replied as because what you are thinking is not going to happen so that’s why I warned you, then I said no I don’t think it was the correct reason for my question, then s said it is the only reason, then I said no, think and say me the correct reason whenever you want, bye for now. Later at night I sent a message for s, but there is no replay for that message. Later I got a message from s.

s-hi,

i-is 10:00pm is your daily timing? For chatting.

s-not like that, I have work at home to do

i-oh! Really, now say truth  

s-how come you know that I was not telling truth?

i-if you love someone from your heart, you will come to know.

s-cha now say me truth, how?

i-seriously it’s true. If you love someone u will come to know it.

s-no, I won’t believe you.

i-ok, if you want you can test on someone who truly loves you.

s-ok, why did you texted me.

i-can I call you? Texting is hard

s-no

i-why?

s-if my mom and dad sees me that’s it they will kill me

i-so you don’t have freedom in your home.

s-not in all conditions.

i-ok.

s-why did you texted me?

I-to know the correct reason

s-for what

i-why did you warned me

s-i already told you

i-no I want correct reason

s-no I can’t find any reasons more than that.

i-shall i say

s-yes

i-it’s because you have little bit positive feelings inside you.

s-how could you say that?

i-no I didn’t you expressed it yours self

s-when?

i-by warning me.

S-no I won’t agree with you. Good night, bye

i-oyyyyyyyyy! Sweet dreams, byeeeeeeeeee.

Conversation ended between I and s, later I slept.

Next day in collage, during in class hours as usually i is staring at s, It is a common thing that happens daily but today s was also seeing back at I, they both were seeing each other and laughing it is continued all the day, while living the s waved her hand and sad bye to I, later I also waved at her and said bye to s. later that night I texted to her but there no reply from her, again I texted her at around10;00pm but there is no reply from her. later I tried for some time and I slept. Next day I went to collage but s didn’t came to collage, then I got tensed and asked her friend and he came to know that she is suffering from heavy fever, after hearing that I felt very sad, and decided to meet s for meeting I asked her friend to help and she agreed to help then they both went her village and I asked her friend to bring her to temple which is nearby s house, later her friend went s house and brought her to temple, when I saw s at that moment I felt very happy and both were seeing at each other with lots of love and silence is covered over that place it is broken by her friend by saying hello we don’t have that much of time then I replied ok and asked s,

i-how are you

s-i am fine, y did you came you can message me, instead of coming

i-yes, but if I message you I can know just you are safe, but if I come I can feel you

s-stopsaying movie dialogues.

i-whether in movie or in real life love will be love always it is a special feeling

s-oh! No now I can’t talk with you, you came here to see me na,

i-yes

s-ok, you saw me na, and it’s time your time to go

i-wait let me pray to good, after that I will leave

s-ok continue.

i-it’s completed, take care bye, I will text at night keep your phone with you,

s-no, don’t text me I won’t replay you.

i-bye take care.

I left and after some time they both also left the temple, later at night I texted s,

i-hiiiiiiiiiiii, how was your health.

s-it’s fine, I can’t chat with you now, bye don’t text me

later I didn’t texted her.

 

In between this I and his friends have to participate in a kickboxing tournament. For this I have to practice more than his regular hours, because there is not much time for tournament, not more than one week, so I had to work hard for it, so I decided to take leave from collage until the completion of tournament, I is preparing hard for it he didn’t went to collage since 2days, at the second day night I got a message from s,

s-hiiiii

i-hiii, how is your health now?

s-good, why are you not coming to collage?

i-are you coming to collage?

s-no

i-then, how did you know that I am not going to collage

s-my friends told to me.

i-ok. i had a little work, I will be not coming to collage for almost a week.

s-ok, what is that work?

i-nothing, I have to participate in a kickboxing tournament.

s-ohh! Really

i-yes

s-you never said to me that you are preparing for kickboxing.

i-it is not a big issue that’s why I didn’t said.

s-ok, all the best

i-thank you

s-what else

i-before going for tournament, once I will come to collage,

s-why?

i-just simply

s-that’s It, you come to collage just simply.

i-yes

s-bye, good night

i-oyyyyyy! When are you coming to collage?

s-why?

i-just to know.

s-i won’t say.

i-why?

s-just simply. Bye good night.

i-i am coming to collage tomorrow.

i-sweet dreams bye.

Next day I went collage and waiting for s, as he expected she came to collage, then I went to s and asked

i-hiiiii, how are you?

s- good, why did you come to collage?

i-just to see you, before going to tournament.

s-why did you want to see me?

i-at present I can’t say you exactly

s-why can’t you say?

i-because it is a feeling, I can’t explain

i-bye. I am leaving now.

s-what about classes?

i-not attending. I have to go for practice.

s-okk. All the best

i-thank you

later I left the collage with a satisfaction, and joined his friends for practice, later coach said tournament is going to start on21st and venue is Hyderabad, it will be held for tow days, so we have to start today night at 7:00pm.so go now and pack your bags. Later I and his friends went to Hyderabad, and out of 8people 4got gold medals including I, and 2people got silver medals and the rest got bronze. And another happy news was those who got gold medals are selected for state level kickboxing champion ship. So all decided to celebrate, at that night coach and some other friends brought some hard drinks they forced I to have, but I rejected and said I don’t have a habit of a drinking and I will never touch them in my life. Next day they had to move from Hyderabad but bus is at night9:00pm they had almost 10hours of time, so they decided to go for movie and shopping in this gap of time, later after finishing shopping, they came to bus stop and had some dinner and went back to ongole.

After coming back I didn’t went collage, he just relaxed at his hostel, but I went collageat5:00pm to meet s outside the collage. After some time s came from the collage then s saw I and she smiled, then i-hiii, how are you.

s-good, you

i-good.

s-what about your tournament

i-it’s over.

s-ohhh! Have you got anything from tournament.

i-yes I got gold medal, and selected for state level

s-congrats

i-thank you.

s-why did you came to collage now

i-just to meet friends

s-okay, then bye, and she left suddenly, I didn’t understand why she went so suddenly. Later at night I messaged s

i-hiii

s-why did you messaged me?

i-why are you so angry on me?

s-no I don’t have angry on any one, especially on you

i-what happened, what wrong I did

s-don’t you know, what you did

i-what are you talking about, I am not getting, say me what wrong I did.

s-you don’t even message when you are in Hyderabad.

i-sorry really sorry, I was busy in tournament.

s-at least you didn’t said that you are going to Hyderabad.

i-sorry sorry, it was my mistake

s-it’s okay

i-why did you left so suddenly when I was talking with you at collage, Actually I came to collage to       see you and to talk with you.

s-it’s because of you, I was angry on you and I if were there for few more minutes I would have beaten you.

i-i am waiting

s-for what

i-to listen, those three beautiful and magical words

s-what are you talking about

i-i am saying that you are mentally connected to me

s-it means

i-there is something, something between us

s-nothing

I-ok, are you coming to collage tomorrow

s-yes, but why

i-try to come early in the morning by8:00am I will be waiting for you in class room

s-why should I come

i-because I want to talk with you directly.

i-bye goodnight.

s-no I won’t come.

s-bye good night

next day I went to collage by7:55am he is waiting for s, as he expected s came to collage early as I said. Later I went to s and said

i-thanks for coming.

s-why did you asked me to come so early

i-wait I will say, first you say me one thing

s-what do you want to know

i-what is your opinion on love

s-it is a great feeling.

I -love is not only about feeling, love means connecting two hearts with one soul, love is about caring for each other, love means being the reason for smile, I promise you I will never let your smile go away form your lips. I LOVE YOU.



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