A story

Pieces from my journal

If I were to write ....
If I were to write a story would you read it? Would you capture it ? Cherish it ?
If I were to write you a story would you pay attention to every comma, every indent, every period?
If I were to write you a story would you read it 3 times through then read it once more?
If I were to write and write and write, would you promise to read it or at least pretend to?

If I were to write, my only form of speaking my frozen words would you promise to listen ?
To what I have to say ?

To what I'm writing
Thinking
Feeling
Saying
Telling you?

Would you ?
Would you?
Oh would you ?
Tell me you would
At least try and put some effort

If only oh only you understood the story was written for you ?
About you
Because I really like you

Author's Note

I just write

Reviews

[Crusty Pizza Stain]

I didn't read this..........

[Crusty Pizza Stain]

OK, I did, but only one time.

[zainul]

This is a heartfelt write.
Any person with good heart can't ignore it.

[Sami Khalil]

Good questions , good poem...:)................

[Chadvonswan]

Our words make us immortal. To deny reading our words would be like denying us our chance to live and say the things we may not be able to speak,, but words will last forever. This poem will float around in the digital void of the internet and will probably be read by hundreds of thousands before the earth consumes itself.

[ZackOfBridge]

Yeah i would read, and i would at least have the decency to pretend that i did. Interesting poem Naraly, it sums up the feeling of a lot writers and that is "Does anyone care to read this?"

[captain]

If I would read you, I would set aside the technicalities of writing. I would pay more attention to the depth, plot, feelings and deep meaning of your story. You have expressed yourself really well, writing is also a journey like life is too.