Charles St. Terminal

Charles St. Terminal

A Poem by Naomi Bloom
"

Inspired by a woman that I encountered at my local bus terminal.

"

“S**t!”


She gasps, looking out at the people waiting for buses

She talks to herself quickly but loudly, turning away

As if she were reciting her lines for a play

A blonde woman

So neatly yet modestly put together


How could one bus stop be so full of crazies?

The old woman and her toddler granddaughter 

With bright yellow hair

Get up from their bench and move away in fear

While I draw closer


She mumbles so fiercely and so quietly

That I cannot make out a word

She is so tightly wound

Like a broken watch

At a mad tea party


Suddenly she disappeared

And my bus came


What did life do to her?


As I ride down King

I see her again

Beaming as she walks by the skating rink

In front of town hall

Reciting her own world for herself


Why does God hate her?

© 2013 Naomi Bloom


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

The end is powerful- society fears this woman- people are left to wander aimlessly- more often becoming victims than perpetrators and they have no one to help them. A society is judged on how it treats its most vulnerable citizens. You capture all of that within the implication of your poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Naomi Bloom

11 Years Ago

Thank you.

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

272 Views
1 Review
Added on February 4, 2013
Last Updated on February 4, 2013
Tags: charles street, terminal, bus, transportation, crazy, insane, psychotic, encounter, woman, person, humanity, god, fate, birth, poem, poetry, writer, writing, waterloo, ontario, canada, talking, mania

Author

Naomi Bloom
Naomi Bloom

Ontario, Canada



About
An amateur writer of poems, short stories and other types of writing. I recently graduated from university and I am trying to figure out what to do with my life. Victorian England, name meanings, be.. more..

Writing
Drowning Drowning

A Poem by Naomi Bloom