Little Japanese Doll

Little Japanese Doll 

 

 

Alone

She sits on the shelf

Small Japanese doll from the east

Carefully

She scoots to the edge to get down

Falling, oh no she’s falling

Fragile

 

 

Girl frowns

Watching the doll fall

So quickly

Japanese doll caught by small hands

No mars on her painted face

Girl smiles

 

 

Reviews

[Livana Lowell]

Yeah, this poem does create an image in my head having someone catch you while you fall is the interpretation I recive from reading this poem. This extremely pretty with a lot of meaning behind such short stanzas.

[An owl on the moon]

This is beautifully done, both form and flow.. You create such a wondrous, vivid imagery in your words.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Beautifully written, so delicately and sweetly like the Japanese doll itself... Great work!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very good images throughout.. I could see it all in my mind.. i like it .. and the pictures.

Chloe

[HorrorMaster]

aww very beautiful

[Eric Cox]

Excellent imagery...fragile doll falls and is caught by the little girl who smiles, beautiful and so nicely done.