Castle in the Clouds

Castle in the Clouds

 

 

 

Castle in the clouds

See my fantasy relived

At the rainbow’s end

 

Inside on their thrones

King and Queen are holding court

A bride for the prince

 

A search must be done

And the perfect princess found

At a festive ball

 

Beauty like the night

As moonbeams sparkle above

She’s his destiny

 

Vision to behold

In gown of changing colors

Wearing glass slippers

 

Dance throughout the night

Just until the clock strikes twelve

Gown turns to tatters

 

Prince must find her soon

Roams the countryside by day

Searching for the girl

 

On her tiny foot

Slipper fits just like a glove

Tattered dress no more

 

Princess of the realm

Dances across the ballroom

In her wedding gown

 

One day she’ll be queen

Of the castle in the clouds

At the rainbow’s end

 

 

Reviews

[Lorraine]

What a nice poetic version of a classic fairytale. You captured the light and magical appeal of Cinderella with the addition of a few dramatic colors and flavors here and there to create a poem both imaginative and classical. Great Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

This is absolutely just the sweetest write! I am going to library this. I loved the picture, the font and color, all of it. Well done!

~True

[Prateeksha Khot]

That is so sweet ! I loved it ! I think it totally went with the picture. Beautiful flow of poems, my favorite would be :

Beauty like the night

As moonbeams sparkle above

She’s his destiny

[Cheryl J. Turner]

Aww I read this to my five year old daughter and she loved it. A very sweet piece.

[Shalini Dinesh]

wow very cute poem, i just loved it

[Lyra H]

Aw it's so magical! :D