Blood Thirst

Blood Thirst     Vampire stalks the night Lust for crimson blood churns in his veins His evil eyes survey his surroundings The light of the moon wanes Dark shadows hide him from view His nostrils flare, crimson blood in the air Leora waits at her stop He has her scent too late to beware The moment their eyes meet Captivated within his evil charms Leora is completely under his spell She collapses in his arms He makes love to her with his eyes She draws in her final breath She is in the right position Maximum drainage ushers death His eyes flood with ecstasy Sharp fangs sink deep Into soft delicate flesh She’s too mesmerized to weep Sucking her crimson blood into his veins Completing his reason for being Her body quivers in death’s wake She cries out, but never fleeing In a single moment of rapture Leora cries out in exotic pain Her heart ceases to beat. Left dead in the falling rain Still he feels the thirst Driving him into the night He stalks another prey Under the full moon bright Another day, another year His thirst drives him on Always searching the night He is Satan’s spawn A female catches his eye Her crimson blood he can almost taste His tongue runs across his lips His evil heart raced He follows her in the shadows She is small and all alone He withdraws from the shadows With a whiff of musky cologne Suddenly she turns Hate fills her innocent eyes She maybe small But that is her disguise She holds justice for her sister In her hand a wooden stake It’s his turn to bleed To his heart a burning ache The stake is thrust deep He cries out in pain She pierced his black heart Dead vampire in the rain   Author: Nancy Lee Shrader By nannalee© 2009 nannalee (All rights reserved)

 

 

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

He makes love to her with his eyes
She draws in her final breath
She is in the right position
Maximum drainage ushers death

On my he is Blood Thirsty to be sure

a great Vampire piece~ THanks for sharing

this in Such THings as Vampires Contest

Fran

[Cheri]

great job Nanc! You always were a lover of the 'dark'... ha ha

[Gema]

I really love this it made me belive and to be hooked well done xxx

[Tiffany]

Pretty cool I love the last sentance

[Fabian G. Franklin]

great vampire tale, i like the image of the vampire dying in the rain

[Frank Terino]

This poem is beautifully written and expressed and is visually appealing.
I really enjoyed the way you created this poem in imagery and emotion
Nicely done, keep up the great work.

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Wow, I didn't think you delved into the darkness Ms. Shrader :) I love it! Your piece reads like a well-crafted, dark yet romantic prologue with a tinge of sensuality embracing it. I also like the graphic. I enjoyed reading this.

[darkgurl]

Wow! This is amazing, like your write and the graphics, very well written......Kim