Choice

Choice

A Poem by alltheloveabove
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just thoughts.

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Would you, love,
be a sheep and face an eternity of safe boredom
or be a wolf - 
all the thrill in the world- but alone?

© 2012 alltheloveabove


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I am already a wolf...
I think I would continue your poem by this one
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AdamLebzo/1114536/

Posted 11 Years Ago


The plummeting sheep? Little red riding-hood,to be alone, with her?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well what a question, or invitation? Short, sweet and to the point. You definately get your point across! I like it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
this is so beautiful, and so deep. welldone!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This brings a quote to mind from the great C.S. Lewis:

"We are born helpless. As soon as we are fully conscious we discover loneliness. We need others physically, emotionally, intellectually: we need them if we are to know anything, even ourselves."

I don't think there is a sense of thrill in being alone, I think that it creates a deeper sense of longing in us. Thought provoking stuff nonetheless, as always!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 6, 2012
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Tags: boredom, thrill, wolf, love, choice

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alltheloveabove
alltheloveabove

Geneva, Switzerland



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Hi everyone :) My name is Jina Kim and I am more of a spontaneous writer, scribbling, or rather typing away furiously until I click 'submit.' Thank you for the reads and the reviews, it's highly app.. more..

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